Tone

Also called Mood, Atmosphere, Register

The attitude a piece of writing takes towards its subject — and the word students most often use vaguely.

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What it is

Tone is the writer's or speaker's attitude: bitter, affectionate, detached, mocking, reverent. Mood or atmosphere is what the reader feels, which is related and not the same.

Where it applies

Both English papers.

How it works

Tone comes from word choice, sentence length, punctuation and what is left out. It can shift within a paragraph, and the shift is usually the interesting part.

How to use it in your work

Use a precise adjective. "Negative tone" is not an observation; "resigned", "contemptuous", "clinical" are. Keep a short list of precise tone words and use them.

Then evidence it from the actual words. A tone you cannot point at is a tone you invented.

Where to get help

Your teacher, and past papers for the language questions.

Revise this with a song

These are ours. We write revision songs because a lot of people remember a tune when they cannot remember a page, and because revising out loud in the kitchen beats staring at a highlighter.

The English Exam Survival Song How to approach the English papers under time pressure.

Where to read more

Read the official guidance

Last reviewed 2026-08-28 by Fiducia Together · Next review due 2027-08-28