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Armitage's poem about a soldier who cannot stop remembering a shooting. Trauma in ordinary language.
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What it is
A poem from The Not Dead (2008), based on a soldier's testimony, in which the speaker describes shooting a looter and being unable to leave the memory behind.
A standard anthology poem in the Power and Conflict cluster.
Where it applies
English Literature poetry anthology, usually compared with another poem about conflict.
How it works
The language is deliberately colloquial — "legs it", "sort of inside out", "dug in behind enemy lines" — so the horror arrives in the voice of somebody who is not trying to be poetic. That is the effect.
The structure moves from a shared account ("we"), to a personal one ("I"), to the present tense: the memory stops being past.
"Blood-shadow" and the final "his bloody life in my bloody hands" carry a double meaning — swearing, and literal blood — and echo Macbeth.
How to use it in your work
The shift in pronoun and tense is the structural point and it is a strong one.
Do not over-decorate. The poem's power is its plainness; an essay that treats every line as ornate metaphor misreads it.
It pairs with any poem about the effects of conflict rather than the fighting itself.
Where to get help
Your teacher, first — set texts vary by board and by school, and yours is the one that counts. Your board's past papers and examiners' reports are free online and say plainly what separates the bands.
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- Remains Armitage's poem, line by line.
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Last reviewed 2026-08-28 by Fiducia Together · Next review due 2027-08-28
Please note: This page explains a word or a process in education. It is general information about the system, the law and the guidance in England — not advice about your child, your school or your exam. If a decision is going against you, get advice from one of the free services we link to before you agree to anything or miss a deadline. If you are revising, check your own exam board's specification: boards word things differently and yours is the one that marks you.